A New Date # 3 Poem by David DeSantis

A New Date # 3

Rating: 5.0


Hot tubs have their benefits,
I think.

45 degrees out
but heating up in here,
I find bare skin
And pull her close,

A bare bodied embrace.

It amazes me how fragilely
defined a woman can be.
The strength I embody as a man,
Overpowering,
Protecting,
Yet somehow,
sometimes
Afraid to use it.

In her smile,
only a longing for strength.
A complete union of passion and protection.

What a mischievous smile.

Wrapped up in the heat
I watch as wrapped legs
Seem to somehow still surprise me.

The legs of a dancer.

Better to return the favor
With the grip of a wrestler.

Steamy, heated,
Bubbling embrace.
She bites down hard on my lip
While the rhythmic pounding of the water’s
Course,
Seems to pursue the rhythm defined in
our own movements.

She must be creative,
This one loves to feel.

Top undone,
Bottom parted,
Legs wrapped,
Hot tub movements,

I’m suddenly happy
In my choice of restaurants.


Copyright (c) David DeSantis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 30 April 2008

Mmmm.... should this one have come with a warning? ? HG: -) xx

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Jurietta Duraan 12 May 2008

Your endings are always great and surprising! Sensual poem.... you really write well, David... I'm not surprised though... you are certainly consistent. Yuri*

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Flora Gillingham 01 May 2008

Nice poem. You always provide a good twist. Fx

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R H 01 May 2008

An undressing of minds as well as bodies here...the observations of male vs female throughout evolution bubbles to the surface - the laws of sexual attraction are on display here in this astutely observed narrative. Another fine piece here David. j x

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Pat Diaz 01 May 2008

Its a really good pice of work I really like how you expressed your feelings nice work! !

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Lynda Robson 30 April 2008

Wow, this fast paced poem is quite steamy lol, nicely written David, Lynda xx

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