I’d love to swim in a sea of you,
Or Better yet
Your private sea.
For it’s quite amazing
how I feel nothing,
Unless of course it pertains to you.
You're like a stimulant without a pill,
A drug upon consumption
And its funny how when you leave
My nose bleeds a little.
The nose-bleed metaphor has a certain poignancy - later, the physicality of love's expression moves beyond mere coke-like addicition. Rgds, Ivan
Is this a love poem? It seems so -a weird love poem - I like the closing last line very much!
An analogy perfectly carried through.... and I hope you get your next fix soon. :) t x
Great poem David, love is the the best addiction to have,10 Lynda xx
great poem mate! ! ! ! ur addicted to that thing called 'love'..that is so cute..definetely deserves a 10....
Amazing bro, absolutely amazing........may the highs of love bring shaky thighs and dizzy eyes.......You never fail to amaze me...many fine poets have come to live in you bro..*10+ stacks of dishes Jon
wow wow wow... (again) - this is not about lovemaking ALONE but also about sensual VERY intimate being together.... VERY good.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I believe so its a love poem.... much more a lovemaking! A 10.