David DeSantis
Utica, NY
David DeSantis
Utica, NY
My Personal Cocaine
Rating: ★3.2
I’d love to swim in a sea of you,
Or Better yet
Your private sea.
For it’s quite amazing
how I feel nothing,
Unless of course it pertains to you.
You're like a stimulant without a pill,
A drug upon consumption
And its funny how when you leave
My nose bleeds a little.
Or Better yet
Your private sea.
For it’s quite amazing
how I feel nothing,
Unless of course it pertains to you.
You're like a stimulant without a pill,
A drug upon consumption
And its funny how when you leave
My nose bleeds a little.
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COMMENTS
Sharon Goodwin
03 October 2008
Damn! That sounds like a person I need. I like this one.
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angelianne 1012
19 June 2008
great poem mate! ! ! ! ur addicted to that thing called 'love'..that is so cute..definetely deserves a 10....
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~ Jon London ~
18 June 2008
Amazing bro, absolutely amazing........may the highs of love bring shaky thighs and dizzy eyes.......You never fail to amaze me...many fine poets have come to live in you bro..*10+
stacks of dishes
Jon
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Jurietta Duraan
18 June 2008
wow wow wow... (again) - this is not about lovemaking ALONE but also about sensual VERY intimate being together.... VERY good.
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Ivan Donn Carswell
17 June 2008
The nose-bleed metaphor has a certain poignancy - later, the physicality of love's expression moves beyond mere coke-like addicition. Rgds, Ivan
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Onelia Avelar
17 June 2008
Is this a love poem? It seems so -a weird love poem - I like the closing last line very much!
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Tara very irritated with PH injustice
17 June 2008
An analogy perfectly carried through.... and I hope you get your next fix soon. :) t x
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Lynda Robson
17 June 2008
Great poem David, love is the the best addiction to have,10
Lynda xx
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