My Personal Cocaine

Rating: 3.2
I’d love to swim in a sea of you,
Or Better yet
Your private sea.
For it’s quite amazing
how I feel nothing,
Unless of course it pertains to you.

You're like a stimulant without a pill,
A drug upon consumption
And its funny how when you leave
My nose bleeds a little.
Tuesday, June 17, 2008
Sharon Goodwin 03 October 2008
Damn! That sounds like a person I need. I like this one.
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Emancipation Planz 22 June 2008
I see the highlight.. where one must sniff....10derly...
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angelianne 1012 19 June 2008
great poem mate! ! ! ! ur addicted to that thing called 'love'..that is so cute..definetely deserves a 10....
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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2008
Amazing bro, absolutely amazing........may the highs of love bring shaky thighs and dizzy eyes.......You never fail to amaze me...many fine poets have come to live in you bro..*10+ stacks of dishes Jon
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Jurietta Duraan 18 June 2008
wow wow wow... (again) - this is not about lovemaking ALONE but also about sensual VERY intimate being together.... VERY good.
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Marvin Brato 18 June 2008
I believe so its a love poem.... much more a lovemaking! A 10.
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Ivan Donn Carswell 17 June 2008
The nose-bleed metaphor has a certain poignancy - later, the physicality of love's expression moves beyond mere coke-like addicition. Rgds, Ivan
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Onelia Avelar 17 June 2008
Is this a love poem? It seems so -a weird love poem - I like the closing last line very much!
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An analogy perfectly carried through.... and I hope you get your next fix soon. :) t x
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Lynda Robson 17 June 2008
Great poem David, love is the the best addiction to have,10 Lynda xx
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