I’d love to swim in a sea of you,
Or Better yet
Your private sea.
For it’s quite amazing
how I feel nothing,
Unless of course it pertains to you.
You're like a stimulant without a pill,
A drug upon consumption
And its funny how when you leave
My nose bleeds a little.
The nose-bleed metaphor has a certain poignancy - later, the physicality of love's expression moves beyond mere coke-like addicition. Rgds, Ivan
Is this a love poem? It seems so -a weird love poem - I like the closing last line very much!
An analogy perfectly carried through.... and I hope you get your next fix soon. :) t x
Great poem David, love is the the best addiction to have,10 Lynda xx
Damn! That sounds like a person I need. I like this one.
I see the highlight.. where one must sniff....10derly...
great poem mate! ! ! ! ur addicted to that thing called 'love'..that is so cute..definetely deserves a 10....
Amazing bro, absolutely amazing........may the highs of love bring shaky thighs and dizzy eyes.......You never fail to amaze me...many fine poets have come to live in you bro..*10+ stacks of dishes Jon
wow wow wow... (again) - this is not about lovemaking ALONE but also about sensual VERY intimate being together.... VERY good.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I believe so its a love poem.... much more a lovemaking! A 10.