A New Date Poem by David DeSantis
A New Date
Beautiful Blue Eyes,
And a well worn dress
I have not felt this feeling
In many years.
So many wasted nights,
chasing tails
And spinning quarters.
Emptying bottles,
And filling a gap.
A gap that she set high.
And now,
Beautiful Blue eyes
And a heart-sleeve smile.
I have not felt this feeling
In many years.
Just when the bottom
Had burst
And my feet
remained
trapped
by weights
too heavy to bear.
My imagination depressed
By devil worn concepts
and lingering tans,
make-up smiles,
and fake purse highs,
Beautiful blue eyes,
and a soul to match.
Guitar voice lips,
And piano hands.
I have not felt this feeling
In many years.
Copyright (c) David DeSantis
sounds like you might have found someone you enjoy. kudos kiddo. it's got that moving on feeling.
Sounds delightful, possible flip of the stomach? Must be love..... HG: -) xx
Simply beautiful...'guitar voice lips and piano hands'... your imagery is stunning, seems like you've found the perfect muse... j x
Gosh, David. Has she conquered your beautiful old, cynical heart? Wonderful if she inspires you to such lovely verses. Fx
Just read this today and am filed with great joy - reminds me of my meeting the greatest girl a man could have - my wife beautiful blue eyes and a well worn dress a new history awaits writing words sewn in threads of Dave's soul
Waking up to know you are back on track with what you love do and feel is quite marvelous! A 10.
Stunning stunning poem - it holds so much promise... I agree with Brittany about my favourite lines...
I absolutely love this... I see it playing out as I read it... My favorite lines: 'Beautiful blue eyes, and a soul to match. Guitar voice lips, And piano hands.' Mmm, I suppose I'm partial to the last line because I'm a pianist. :)
Hello David, if this is still recent then congradulations my friend. Good read, LC
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 11:03:34 PM # 1.0.0.1119
a special moment like this will last forever............i can relate to this.......