A New Day Is Dawning Poem by DM W

A New Day Is Dawning

Rating: 5.0


A new day dawning:
Raindrops are beating on leaves.
Flowers offer hymns.

Tuesday, May 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Hopkins 13 August 2022

A well penned Haiku, Dominic.

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Chinedu Dike 06 September 2020

A concise and witty bit of verse. A beautiful creation.

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Wonderful imagery, beating leaves and hymning flowers.

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Dominic Windram 05 May 2020

Thanks Parameswaran. I greatly appreciate your perceptive comments!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 May 2020

A well composed haiku. Simply wonderful....10++

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Dominic Windram 05 May 2020

Thanks Bernard...the seasons here in England are particularly striking and offer ample inspiration for poetic works.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 May 2020

rhythm of newborn raindrops drenching the flowers fearlessly to make beauty

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Dominic Windram 05 May 2020

Thanks Mahtab..I also really like your poetic imagery!

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