A Peaceful Sunday Dawn Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Peaceful Sunday Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Throughout the Saturday night,
everyone suffering from a fever
was either out to enjoy the night
or busy on his cell phone.
No, they didn't have time to talk to a loved one.
The basic purpose of a cell phone
to talk to someone
they have forgotten.
They don't have time to ask the friends or acquaintances
if they are all right.
Are they in some sort of trouble
and need any help.
The mentally tired old man took advantage of it.
He went to bed early and enjoyed a deep and peaceful sleep.
Nature was so happy with him
that it awarded him with a lovely dawn
in that he couldn't listen to a human voice.
The pleasant twilight and chirping of birds
welcomed old man.
He sat on the wet green carpet
With the dancers whose legs were firmly held by the earth
whose hands were signaling the skies to send their breaths
that may touch the hidden beauty of their colorful parts.
And lo,
pleasant and passionate winds came
touched the virgin buds
and the flowers hypnotized the old man.
He became a part of the colors and fragrance
and his colorful and fragrant thoughts
inspired him to react with a beauty
that he always lacked on other days.
Thanks to a silent, peaceful and creative Sunday dawn!
The tired noise makers are still in their beds.

Saturday, August 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeanette Telusma 02 May 2018

A lovely poem here, well written and filled with vibrant pictures that encapsulate wonderful thoughts of nature.

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Khalid Saifullah 17 October 2017

What a poem, i was amazed.........................................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2017

He became a part of the colors and fragrance and his colorful and fragrant thoughts inspired him to react with a beauty that he always lacked on other days. Thanks to a silent, peaceful and creative Sunday dawn! The tired noise makers are still in their beds... touching expression on peaceful sunday dawn. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 19 August 2017

A poem that gives a soothing feel to all the senses! I can really experience the peace and contentment, the old man felt on the beautiful and serene Sunday morn! A 10

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