Isaac Maliya

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A Poem Is A Cluster Bomb - Poem by Isaac Maliya

A poem assemble ideas,
Concentrates experience
Await its time, place
For its own release
A Poem is a cluster bomb

A Poem explodes
Particle by particle
Projectile by projectile
Piece by piece,
Varying impact on the way
A poem is a cluster bomb

Out of a poem come wails
Out of a poem come hails
Out of a poem comes repair
Out of a poem comes despair
A Poem is a cluster bomb

It spreads in ripples
It travels like a storm
It is fashioned in riddles
It can pour painful scorn
A poem is a cluster bomb!

Friday,17th July,2009
Liverpool, UK

Comments about A Poem Is A Cluster Bomb by Isaac Maliya

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (12/21/2014 11:03:00 PM)

    wow what a lovely poem on poem (Report) Reply

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  • Isaac Maliya (8/3/2009 5:06:00 PM)

    From: TaMaRa HaNaRiNg...dancing with the
    To: Isaac Maliya
    Date-Time: 8/3/2009 5: 02: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: a poem is a cluster bomb..
    hi friend..sorry unable to comment on any poem as some problem iam facing since two days..enjoyed your poem..

    it has a new concept about the poem with a beautifuul describtion of the poet's pregnacy, the poem delivery and kind of it's new born..loved it
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  • (8/3/2009 1:11:00 PM)

    Yeah.. a good poem fuses slowly to explode into vibrant colors..beautifuly written (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/21/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    A poem is the song of the heart my friend Isaac. (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2009 3:34:00 AM)

    i liked so much the third stanza...but the whole poem is great....well done Isaac (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2009 5:41:00 AM)

    a true write about cogitations and well composed..a good verses...10 (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (7/19/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    bees of sweet words assemble the honey of cluster...........
    Through life's roller-coaster...........and when when it bursts
    it is a blaster bespattered here and there, everywhere.10+++
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  • (7/19/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    there can be a lot of potential in a poem...a good reader gets most of it...written very well....10 (Report) Reply

  • (7/19/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    An interesting train of thought...thought provoking which is what a poem should be........

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  • (7/19/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    lovely conception of poem as
    a cluster bomb
    good write
    -10 anjali
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/19/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    penned the truth beautifully!
    poems has a power which can give poemotheraphy!
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  • (7/19/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    Very well expressed Isaac...a poem has many forms..and can explode with emotions that many have never felt before.....well penned 10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 18, 2009

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