While i'still opening the eyes*
While my heart was still speaking*
While my hands was still warm*
While my arms were still strong to embrace you*
I'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you*
While the Wind was still filling up space in the earth*
While the sun was still lighted my road*
While the moon was still loyal brilliantly for sky*
While the little stars was still took care of me in the dream*
I'promised i'will plant my love in the heart forevermore*
While the dew was still cold for morning day*
While the floWers was still created honey to butterflies and the honeybee*
While the rain was still descending from sky and was wetting the land*
And while the season continued to change*
I'promised never will to change my heart with the other heart*
Received me in all of your life*
I'promised to continue to live throughout your life*
I LOVE this poem! ! It has a lot of sentiment. keep up the good work!
What a lovely devotional love poem. Loved the inter-connection of love and creation. Beautifully penned, from the heart indeed. ; D
'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you* , , , I shall wait for that to happen.. really nice move and full of promises....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
‘I'promised on behalf of the love i'will maintained my heart for you*’ ~ Real love does so I'promised i'will plant my love in the heart forevermore* ~ Real love ramifies I'promised never will to change my heart with the other heart* ~ Real love is one directional I'promised to continue to live throughout your life* ~ Real love is ‘One Unit’ Excellent poetry…and it is diamonded love as stars* are smiling after each sentence… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10