A pulling weed.
A dieing day.
A sun brightened.
A sun gone away.
A pulling weed.
A dieing day.
A yank, a pull, the weed is splayed.
......I liked the rhyme scheme and the way you expressed your fatigue.........bien!
DYING, not dieing.........or are you using poetic license? ? ? and splayed doesn't seem to fit. do you disagree? other than that, i like the poem and the rhyming. thanks for sharing. :) bri
A moment that can mean a lot to reflect on.....like thr weeds that are in ur lige have to b pulled out by us and for that u got to identift the weeds in ur garden of life first..... weeds can b ur weaknesses within or around u..howz that! ! ! !
Time to pull weeds, time to roll weed. A green smile, a day in the yard Worthwhile!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The enemy is dead weeds are dying but friends can help to rid the scourge....love this little ditty that can have many twists to its meaning...regards