A Quotation Or A Lengthy Poem (2) Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

A Quotation Or A Lengthy Poem (2)

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Birth is most valuable of all things on earth
Life has the same value as Birth
Love is worthiest, the most of these three

it makes life feels the beating of the heart
life makes us aware that we live sweet, stupid or smart
it makes us aware we can keep it or lose any part

life can cause living pleasantly or with much stress
much more or much less

either we go climbing to the top of the mountains
or skiing down-hills
we can reach the fresh water fountains
and having left no bills

life can cause living pleasantly or with much stress
much, much more or much, much less

either we talk with Trump and have the world as the enemy
or like Barack Obama, he has God on his spot
and Jesus as the Son of God
the same as we talk, pray and praise God a very lot

if we are that smart
we´ll choose the beating of our heart
that means full and healthy life as our choice
full and healthy life is oft based on love
which means our choice is perhaps God
since He gave mankind life by giving us His Love

and we as mankind and as an individual wish
full and healthy life caused by listening to the beating of our heart
Love makes that all possible

Love makes life feels the beating of our heart
life makes us aware that we live sweet, stupid or smart
it makes us aware we can keep it constantly or lose the whole part
this choice depends only upon our inner heart
let love nestle in there forever, let us be that smart

Birth is most valuable of all things on earth
Life has the same value as birth
Love is worthiest, the most of these three

if we can appreciate this Love that´s His and accept this
we may live an eternal life
without any strife, that´s God´s Promise
alone in solitude or as husband and wife....


Sylvia Frances Chan
AD. Tuesday the 28th of August 2018
@ 21.39 hrs. P.M. West-European Time

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Created, and republished by
Sylvia Frances Chan
Dutch Poetess
Evangelist
World Traveler

AD. Tuesday the 28th of August 2018
@ 21.39 hrs. P.M. West-European Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Love is worthies and life has same values for birth for all the creatures. Accepting life here we accept God's promise. Choice of God is love. Love brings peace and love builds paradise. Revisiting such a lovely poem my mind is filled with God's love. An interesting poem is very well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2018

Part-2 Life causes sometimes pleasant living or sometimes with much stress. We need healthy life and it is possible only for love, peace and for God. Brilliant imaginary. Full vote.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2018

Part-1 Dear Chan, you have astutely and incisively inscribed a wonderful philosophical poem on birth, life and love having touching expression with vividity. You have delineated birth as most valuable things on Earth, life as same value as birth and love as worthiest of these three.

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