A Road To Heaven Poem by Bharati Nayak

A Road To Heaven

Rating: 5.0


Take heart
Forget past
See, how days are flowering poetry
Dreams fruitioning reality
The blankness filled
A bridge is built
You are lifted
To this unearthly abode
Where you exist
with your
Soul and friendly souls
There is bliss
Darkness never
visit there
life is
An ever enchanting Music.

Monday, July 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 19 September 2016

Within this blissful world of poetry, there is no darkness in life but the life leads yyou to an enchanting touch of music. Amazing poem beautifully told. Loved reading it. Thanks. I quote: A bridge is built / You are lifted / To this unearthly abode

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Bharati Nayak 30 September 2016

Thank you Rajnis Manga for your valuable comment.Yes, this world of poetry is full of bliss and happiness.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 30 September 2016

Days flowering poetry! Life an ever-enchanting music! Beautiful poem. (10)

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Bharati Nayak 30 September 2016

Thank you madathil Rajendran Nair for your kind comment.When days flower poetry, it takes away pains.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 October 2022

Life is an enchanting music... true dear poetess. An excellent piece.5 stars

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 April 2020

Soul and friendly souls There is bliss BETTER WOULD BE SOLE TO SOLE MAYBE IT'S ME ONLY I once wrote a poem ROAD TO HEAVEN NONE EXISTED BUT WAS MAINTAINED BY NO LESS THAN SEVEN All amassing the golden sands of time which all wanted to mine no time so in one go all mined the GOLDEN MINE

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Bharati Nayak 23 April 2020

Thank you Poet Poet for your appreciation of my poems.Recently I have become less active here due to time constraints.Still it gives me much satisfaction that my poems are read and appreciated.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 12 January 2019

very nice poetry, ma'am! really road to heaven.

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Valsa George 16 April 2018

I was attracted to this poem by its title. Yes, poetry and supportive friends can lift one to Heaven! They fill our hearts displacing the vacuum within our hearts and build bridges to carry us to Heaven's threshold! It is a magical realm where darkness never visits and bliss abides! I see the importance you attach to poetry and friends!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 October 2017

A sublime piece of work..! Road to heaven is very nicely worded..!!

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