Sunday, October 2, 2005

A Room Full Of People Talking Comments

Rating: 4.5

A room full of people talking like runaway
trains that won’t ever stop.
No sun or moon rises or sets for the room—
no day or night, no seasons.
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Max Reif
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Julia Klimenova 12 February 2006

Very true. But when there are introverts standing in every corner, they connect in their silent way, and let other people move fast by: they know better than that. I totally relate to this poem. Thank you for sharing. Julia

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Lee Tran 29 October 2005

Brings back memories of a recent poetry slam I went to for the first time, ..Love the expressions used in the second stanza, setting a mature mood. Keep up the good work! !

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Amberlee Carter 06 October 2005

'He stands against the corner of a wall. He tries to become the corner, ' I am a chronic observer of life...I loved this piece..

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Ivy Christou 06 October 2005

Sometimes I feel exactly like him. Big room, people that you don't really know and never give you the chance to speak.. Realistic poem and well written! HBH

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Lori Boulard 02 October 2005

What happens next? ? C'mon, don't leave us hanging - give the guy his own poem! We like to cheer for the underdog, you know?

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