~~~a Rose Bloomed In My Hands~~ Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

~~~a Rose Bloomed In My Hands~~

Rating: 5.0


She was screaming…
Rushed into my hands…
Help me………
My baby’s on the way..
I received wings from Mother Nature
Flew to a room in ER with her
Take a deep breath dear….
Don’t grab my hand darling…
I need my hands free
I am helping you…..
I am with you..
My soul is always for people like you
Oh yeah.. Slowly push
Lovely…
Petals unveiled
Clamped the chord…
Suspended her from the feet
Patted gently
Cutie birdie started chirping
Darling you’ve got a little daughter
She is very healthy.
A Rose bloomed in my hands

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faith Serencko 15 January 2009

That's so sweet and very beautiful.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 January 2009

A very nice poem reflecting a factual experience of child birth which is indeed a very joyious moment for a mother as well as for a doctor.You have shown the whole picture of a step by step delievery process in some really fine verses. The ending of the poem depicts the beauty of a newborn and by using the simli of a blooming rose, you have made it worth reading.

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John Smith 17 January 2009

Captured one of life's most natural feats so naturally.

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Onelia Avelar 25 January 2009

My favorite poem of yours!

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 December 2015

h yeah.. Slowly push Lovely… Petals unveiled Clamped the chord… Suspended her from the feet beautiful description of a wonderful birth and your helping hands. and finally the comment A rose bloomed.. sooo nice.

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Pabodha Hettige 14 March 2010

I really like your poem. You have portrayed a joyous moment in a very delicate way. Its simply a great work. Best wishes.

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Dulakshi Wakista 02 March 2010

Well expressed.I love this poem.You've portrayed a nice image.I love dthese lines. Cutie birdie started chirping Darling you’ve got a little daughter She is very healthy. A Rose bloomed in my hands' Beautiful flow write.10 for content.

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 May 2009

'|Cutie birdie started chirping Darling you’ve got a little daughter She is very healthy. A Rose bloomed in my hands' lovely words sir..liked it very much..nice poetic expressions too...enjoyed it very much thanks best wishes shan

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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 January 2009

Praiseworthy! When I see this lovely poem I think of Dr.Che Guvera...... of his untimely death?

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