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A Serious Kiss

Rating: 4.7

A seriouskiss feels
like you're floating in the ocean,
Yet like you're sinking slowly.
It makes you feel
complete, feel safe.
a serious kiss feels like
coming home.

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Nikunj Sharma 17 July 2009

a serious kiss is a bliss the bodies being a mean of two hearts clean.....

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

Londiwe, Now, get serious! Cheers. Subroto

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Carl Harris 20 April 2009

Though a brief poem, Londiwe, this fine poem is wonderfully expressed and does capture a reader's imagination with your excellent imagery in it. You clearly have a good talent for expression, and it poetry, that is one of the most important things, to catch and hold the reader's attention with a few short words, which you did very well in this charming poem. Carl.

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Johannes Yeboah 17 April 2009

this poem is soul touching! ! short but has the kill.well done, Londiwe

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