I want to be your fragrant musk,
I want to be that soft breeze that gently touches your soul,
I want to be that fire, which enflames your heart,
I want to bathe in the ocean of your passions,
And feel the caresses of the waves of your love,
I eat, I drink, I sleep you,
These words resonate in me,
“Blessed be thou forever”,
God above- only knows what I desire,
I am sinking -yes I am sinking
Into that labyrinth of love.
I am now a captive of your spell,
My reasoning is blocked,
My sanity stolen,
My normal life seems so out of reach,
You surround me by your powerful aroma of musk,
You so far away across the ocean,
Yet that asian perfume so powerful,
Draws me to you,
My heart is trapped by your love,
And when the shades of twilight close the day,
All I see is you! ! ! -you! ! ! -you! ! ! .
love is joy with all its worries and happies. wonderful written!
O' to be the you for which you write such beautifully about! Someone is quite fortuneate indeed.
I can feel your love for this guy.Its so reaaalllllllll and original.Hope he'll love you too, like you do.Great love poem. Dean Nordy, US of A.
All I see is you In a wintry morning dew In a cat's mew In cow's mow In a sea's blue Nay in life every's hue What I see is you you you. Good work 10A+++++++++++++
lovely poetry nice use of words totally awewsome
Well written. It's obviously an extension of your soul. A BEAUTIFUL attention To the POWER OF LOVE.
A spendid and sweet song that is loaded with love and pregnant with passion!
Such a love is either for God or someone who is a virtual image of God. A nice description of climax of emotions for a true beloved...............10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
what a romantic piece...very girlash..... naizz