Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

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*** A Poem For You *** - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

The distance, laden with terminal disease
Counting the days to eternal abyss

Fragile, a vein ruptures
Agile, a mood bursts

Your scent is across the ocean
I smell the stinky you, in notion

Desire so beautiful, like a poppy
Blossoms, sugar coated with honey

I got no means to come to you
If I can walk the ocean blue

I don’t have to write this poem
Just bury ourselves in a dorm

For a start, before luxury unleashes
We bravely, overcome love patches


PS: I was listening to Andy Williams' song 'Love Story' (where do I begin) whilst writing this lovely poem!


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  • Ruby Mostazir (6/15/2015 2:09:00 AM)

    Jst love it...... (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (3/14/2010 12:45:00 PM)

    Excellency shown here, your great artistic talent has been proven here, one more time...'WISDOM is not a privilege but a GIFT given to us by our creator to be share with the rest of the world...Thanks for sharing...10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (9/18/2009 3:12:00 PM)

    Lavish imagery makes this write opulent. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/27/2009 4:26:00 PM)

    It is very beautiful poem, subtle and good. I like it very much. Thanx. (10v.)
    Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt
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  • (4/30/2009 5:10:00 AM)

    Yuo have a gift my friend, to take words, put them together and paint a story is a gift that owns more value than gold.

    10/10!
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  • (4/7/2009 10:11:00 PM)

    this is an awesome poem. good job (Report)Reply

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  • (3/2/2009 6:30:00 PM)

    I love it and it was a creative poem (Report)Reply

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  • (2/13/2009 5:27:00 AM)

    Cute poem, enjoyed.
    Chhavi Anupam
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  • (2/4/2009 1:28:00 AM)

    u leave me speechless after every single poem i read of urs! ! ! ur amazing! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (2/2/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    This is excellent. Perfect rhymes, Beautiful flow. Very candid. This is one of my best. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/29/2009 8:14:00 PM)

    this poem is really beautiful..
    very well penned..
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  • (1/28/2009 6:27:00 AM)

    absolutly beautiful got 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (1/23/2009 7:56:00 PM)

    I LIKE IT!
    It's very deep.
    Very wonderful.
    And very awesome!
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  • (1/23/2009 7:02:00 PM)

    Great work. I feel the loonging for seeing somebody. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/23/2009 7:52:00 AM)

    Lets count the days to eternal life of peace and love! Great work. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/22/2009 5:36:00 PM)

    pretty poem shows the burning of love the far love nice similes
    i loved this'Desire so beautiful, like a poppy' good for u
    good choose of word beautifully rhymed
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  • (1/22/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    it has meaning if u take the time to read ti an i did i like it really (Report)Reply

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  • Ahmad Shiddiqi (1/22/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    just like the song itself, brother! ! ! simple and create sensuous nuance! ! ! keep writing! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • June Smithster (1/22/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    he who wants faraway love
    must learn
    to walk on water
    first
    CROOOOOOOOOON on ANDY WIlliam(s)
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  • (1/22/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    i loved the flow of the poem it was like soothing. keep me posted on your writing i'll love to read more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 22, 2009


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