A Shooting Star Poem by Gayle Sweeney

A Shooting Star

Rating: 5.0


Between the tall, darkened evergreen trees
Some twinkling stars shined
In the night brightly..
The black sky is a melody
Where a shooting star is
A trolley to our dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 09 January 2016

Great metaphor on a shooting star,

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Valerie Dohren 22 December 2012

Wonderful, very imaginative.

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Joseph Anderson 22 December 2012

May your guiding star lead you through a happy and fulfilling new year. Please write some more

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Smoky Hoss 22 December 2012

Oh, I do like this one; has such an aura of mystic to it. Wonderful words Gayle.

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Lynn Glover 21 February 2011

Short, but a beautiful poem. Great penmanship and thanks for allowing us to read this work of art. Just Great. Lynn

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