# # A Short Winter Poem by Sonya Florentino
# # A Short Winter
They looked
to me like
autumn leaves
struggling to
hang on
Till it
dawned on me
they were
robbins
rehearsing
spring's song
© 2009 Sonya Florentino
just two full lines...bring in telling imagery...pleasing write Sonya...thanks...10
Charming imagery. The robins did not return in February. No wonder it has been so cold and snowy. But the brave daffodils are beginning to bloom. Lovely write...10/10. Always your friend, Sandra
A perfect image, bridging autumn and spring..a short winter indeed. (And good to see you still posting on PH Sonya) . Nomad
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is a darling poem. You would not believe the popups I had to dodge just to read it! Picking my way around all the landmines here, lol.