What starts the whole thing moving?
The flap of as wing or the first trill;
a flash of light that made you believe
in living; the pure taste of spring water -
Oh, really, any of these things will work,
but who can say which one because so many
happen at once? Still, as a frequent prisoner
of indolence, let me add one more: a deed
of charity, which can be as big as you wish.
But if it involves a child, make it clear
and warm in her mind... I forgot
to switch the topic to the maintenance
of things. No matter, we'll consider beginning
and continuation as one big process. But time
is mocking me: it is slipping away. And I must
consider myself in these matters, not in a selfish
way, not even in a privileged way. I know I belong
to a family and will never just be an afterthought.
Well, that's how it began, continues, and disappears.
Is that clear to everyone? If not, we'll do it again.
Tomorrow, perhaps. Okay? Okay!
Fascinating poem, Daniel! Questioning and answering, showing both sides of a mind while writing, very succinct and unselfish, enjoyed this one very much! Thank you for sharing, give it a 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ RoseAnn
This poem came out of me the way yours come out of you.. I wrote it in just a few minutes and it didn't need revision. I like your notion of BOTH SIDES OF A MIND WHILE WRITING
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Everything that happens in life needs a simple explanation. If the mind is able to simplify life, it's so much easier to go through the ups n downs of our existence. Yes, it's just a flash of light we need to believe in living. Life will be good if living and giving go hand in hand. A very inspirational write that seeks to answer questions we all have in mind. A huge 10.