A Single Kiss Poem by Daniel Brick

A Single Kiss

Rating: 5.0


You enter the garden alone
and shut the gate behind you.
You walk swiftly across the lawn
to a tree-shaded place where
your favorite bush of white flowers
grows apart from other bushes.
It feels no fear with your arrival
because you are a woman who writes
poems and thus cherishes everything
touched by the sun, cleansed by rain,
and raised to higher awareness nightly
by moonbeams...
You bend low and place the whisper
of a kiss on a single petal, and it
awakens the latent heart of the flower.
You see nothing happening, but inside
your single kiss releases every flower
from sleep, and tendrils of desire
shoot through the veins and branches
of the bush. Every flower is tense
with borrowed yellow energy of the sun
and seeks to express itself in waves of
fragrance, like the flow of honeyed words
from the mouth of an inspired Sufi poet.
You settle on a blanket beneath an elm tree,
and open your journal to a blank page soon
to be filled with your summer thoughts.
The sun from its lordly summit of power
sends rays which cause a surge of fragrance
from the petals which mingles with your
native fragrance, and both rise into
the ambient air and spread across the garden.
And nothing wicked or mean can withstand
the goodness of this amplified air. All evil is
dispelled by its greater power. You and all
living things breathe deeply this pure air.

Hours later, after you have left the garden,
closing the gate behind you, the exhausted sun
surrenders its fires to the coming night,
Moon beams descend and restore the white flowers
to their vegetative life. The petals curl into
slumber once again, dreaming of you and how
you summoned them to a vivid life with the grace of...
A S I N G L E K I S S

Monday, July 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 07 August 2017

Now this is they way a fairly tale should be written. Forget the princess kissing the prince...she should kiss a flower instead. Such powers of love will restore Nature first, Universe second. Thanks for sharing Daniel. :)

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Roseann Shawiak 31 July 2017

Totally loved reading this imaginative fantasy, it's delightfully enchanting how you portray the flowers being awakened by a single kiss! Your words awakened my mind to this wonderful delicacy of the imaginative. Great poem, Daniel. RoseAnn

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Nosheen Irfan 26 July 2017

What an enchanting atmosphere you have created here. A great tribute to feminine beauty n power. How a single kiss from a woman transforms the garden into a magically delightful place and awakens the soul of Nature, it's a beautiful idea rendered with deep sensitivity and grace. A huge 10.

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Daniel Brick 26 July 2017

Yes, it is a TRIBUTE TO THE FEMININE. Writing this poem was a joyous time for me. I lovd bring in that garden with all things in harmony and love. Thanks much for your regard.

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Glen Kappy 25 July 2017

daniel, i enjoyed the lovely fairy-tale quality of this piece (remembering that fairy tales often tell truths that are suppressed or overlooked) . nice! -glen

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Liza Sudina 25 July 2017

What a beautiful poem, it depicts so mildly the actions of a woman and a flower! what touches me most is that it is completely the look from aside and the poet doesn't disturb a woman, he just stares in a complete silence. I almost feel and start to share his long look. That is the case when I need passiveness from a viewer, that is when I start to go into it and don't want a poem to end.

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Daniel Brick 25 July 2017

I knew this was your comment, dear Liza, because of the word MILD which you've used earlier to describe the tone of one of my poems. Ad Y-e-s, this a poems of observation, not participation: the male poet knows this and does not disturb the communion of woman and flower, and later the woman's communion with her soul through her journal. That's also why I had her shut the gate behind her, arriving and departing. You sensed the privacy and purity of this poem as you read it. At no point did I plan to add another character, especially a man which would spoil the scene. // My rough draft was only 18 lines, the completed poem is almost 40 lines, so I too did not want it to end. also. I'm very happy to responded sensitively to this poem!

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