Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

A Song Of Hearts Calling - Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

my hearts song for you is pure love
music without words
they fade into you
the way water pours into a stream
my voice in this song, soft
catches you hypnotically
filling your mind
I caress you with my song
my love
like fingers
making you smoother
somehow
as if my call were shaping you
close your eyes and remember
as the voice quiets you
it is familiar, that melody
sung for you the instant
trembling fingers touched my soul
the voice rose to a climax
almost a hymn for the sleeping


Comments about A Song Of Hearts Calling by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • (12/4/2006 3:52:00 AM)


    A jerk in this jetty makes me to feel a jot
    but you made it here

    I caress you with my song
    my love
    like fingers
    making you smoother
    somehow
    jovial note you made in this verse...
    music without words
    they fade into you

    whatever I try to write, it may be a mock....
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  • Peter Lebuhn (2/11/2006 9:45:00 PM)


    10x100 on this Eila
    You have captured the pure soul of what love is. The feeling.
    I pictured these words being said to me and they were alive
    Very good work :)

    Namaste

    Peter
    plebuhn@hotmail.com
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 13, 2005



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