A Soul Whispers Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Soul Whispers

Rating: 4.8


Whenever I ask what really he wants?
Everytime he replies ' Leave me alone please.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anonymous Butterfly 23 April 2010

Only two lines and powerful. I think that when someone tells you 'Leave me alone' it means don't go, and they need you there to stay with them. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Alison Cassidy 02 October 2007

A perfect example of less is more from a highly creative soul whisperer. love, Allie xxxx

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Elmer Romulo Valdez 29 September 2007

be persistent... keep on asking, soon the soul will relent and then it tells what he wants... a short piece, yet it evokes a yearning!

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Sandra Fowler 29 September 2007

Very enigmatic. I am sure he will keep on whispering, for that is the nature of the solitary soul. Take care. Always your friend, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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