A Spiritual Courtship: The Lover Speaks Poem by Daniel Brick

A Spiritual Courtship: The Lover Speaks

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There must be a thousand homecomings
before we can say to each other, "I love you."
We must exercise a superb patience,
and wait for all the signs to be fulfilled.
First, the noonday sun must shine
into the forest's west side and dispel all shadows.
A spring harvest must exceed all expectations.


Twelve deer, both male and female, must leave
the woods, and eat apple slices from the palms
of our hands Two eagles, perched high above,
must flap their wings a dozen times, then fly
in tandem around the forest's circumference
before flying away on a northerly trajectory.
The rain that falls just after dawn must smell
as sweet as honey, and nocturnal rainfall must
hover over your sleep. These signs are
only the beginning... A blind man must find
his way to your house and you must serve him
freshly baked bread. And a deaf woman must tell me
in sign language that in her sleep she hears
the music of Mahler. A teenage girl must find
her derelict father and persuade him to return
to the family circle. A woman and a man who have
both betrayed their vows must each morning must
ask for the other's forgiveness until a New Love
raises their lives to a higher union. And then
on an ordinary morning or on an evening as quiet
as the prayers of the redeemed, we will become
aware of an angel casually leaning against a simple
maple tree, and we will know we have achieved
our final homecoming....
























both betrayed their vows must every morning seek
the other's forgiveness until A New Life raises
their love to a higher union. And on an ordinary morning,
or on an evening as quiet as the prayers of the redeemed,
we will become aware of an angel casually leaning
against a simple maple tree, and we will know
we have achieved the last homecoming....

Saturday, October 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2022

A wonderful poem about love and life.

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Glen Kappy 26 October 2017

Hey, Daniel! Interesting to see the word “homecoming” in this poem of yours as I was just in the last few days made aware of a Wendell Berry poem titled “The Homecoming.” It’s thematically similar to this poem. Do you know it? If not, I found it easily on the net. Best to you always! Glen

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Jette Blackstone 22 October 2017

A spiritual courtship crafted with the complications of the human mind. What layers of complexity must be achieved before true fulfillment is rewarded. I like the creativity of the earlier parts of the poem, but the simplicity of the ending with the angel casually leaning against a maple tree on an ordinary day really peaks my interest. Nicely crafted it of writing, storytelling, romance, and imagination.

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Daniel Brick 22 October 2017

Even before I saw the author of this comment I knew it was y-o-u. There is a special way you have of wrapping your mind around a poem and seeing its overall simplicity ironically made of up of complex parts whose contributions. (Of course you have the advantage of having two minds, two brains, two temperaments, and they work harmoniously together - like the seemingly effortless compositions of Mozart.

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Bharati Nayak 21 October 2017

There must be a thousand homecomings before we can say to each other, 'I love you.' We must exercise a superb patience, and wait for all the sign to be fulfilled. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Just love the images drawn in this superbly crafted poem.- - First we must feel love in the nature- - A bird, tree, a morning dew- - - then we come to faithfulness with each other, then comes the kindness and compassion that we feel for others, make our path clear for a smooth and blissful homecoming.

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Daniel Brick 21 October 2017

Wonderful, Bharati! You summarized the moral/spiritual journey at the heart of the poem. You too wrote poems with moral and spiritual themes. It is a legacy we pass on to others, hopefully to the young. Thanks for reading with understanding and appreciation.

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