Kristin Nicole RothDavis
Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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(((A Story Of Love And Greed)))

Rating: 3.1

Long ago in a far away land
Ruled a evil King with a strong hand
He was mean and he was cruel
Such a man should never rule.

He had a daughter and a loving wife
Two tall sons and a marvelous life
His lack of appreciation for what he had
Made the King’s family very sad.

Gold coins piled high with plenty for his needs
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Ian Curtis 07 January 2007

Very good, made me smile. All the best Ian

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Geoff Warden 28 December 2006

And yet another in the people whom have but the highest of likein's unto such a masterful work........WEll Done

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 December 2006

Lots of underlyings here, my dear & capsuled brilliantly into a fairytale decorum... A masterful storyline, Kris....And brilliantly penned....The construction in its own, is show of sterling craftsmanship. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' FRANKSTER ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Patricia Gale 28 December 2006

Sad story, but that shall happen to all if they bid love or' money. Well done!

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