~~a Strange Commitment! ! Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK

~~a Strange Commitment! !

Rating: 5.0

Amongst the distorted shadows in this moonlight
There is one, that waits for me
Every nite, m here on the terrace to see
If this strange commitment isnt decieved

His house isnt too far, but i never tried to see
I just wave at this shadow, and it waves back at me
I stand here, staring at the image, putting the world aside
Though unknown and out of reach, he hides somwhere inside

I wont strangle this bond with the ties of acquaintance
I wish forever it may be.....
tat v remain 2 familiar shadows
sharing a strange similarity................

Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 April 2009

read this once again today. u r awesome princess. what a write! thanks.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 25 October 2008

A truly wonderful poem. Excellent thoughts and great composition. Loved reading it. Thank you very much.

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Stefan Stokes 24 October 2008

Nice! Reminds me of old Japanese love poems, except yours also has a rhyme to it. Beautiful.

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Tj Becker 24 October 2008

What simplicity and warmth this poem had. a feeling of familiarity yet the unknown. This was original and creative. I so enjoyed the read

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