A Struggle Beyond The Mirror Poem by Darkness Herself

A Struggle Beyond The Mirror

Rating: 5.0


At the mirror I stared
Ignoring why I was that scared
A girl was staring back at me
I stood watching her and I didn’t flee
She was begging me
To set her free
Before she would suffocate
Before it would be so late
I gazed at her weary eyes
Tears were growing but with no cries
I wanted to talk to her
But I lost my voice in the way
I wanted to touch her
But she just faded away...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hassan Adan 27 April 2012

Fantasic, amazing poem..i wrote something similar as well about the inner struggle but you wrote your poem beautifully Bravo!

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Marco Driver 29 September 2009

Me like, what you write. The dark is very stark. Me like, what you write.

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Joseph Poewhit 02 March 2009

We all have to come to grips with our realities.

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Paige Sisemore 24 February 2009

This is what every human sees. there innerself wanting to be free. VERY NICE! ! ! ! KEEP GOIN! ! ! ! <3

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Tork Souad Diana 20 February 2009

wow..cool one 10+ ^_^

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