A Thought Of You Poem by Alfredo Jacques

A Thought Of You

Rating: 5.0


A thought of you
Brings happiness to my soul.
I close my eyes to paint you
In my dreams, but
I am sadden knowing,
I will never hug you or
Hold you.
We are worlds apart and
In two different times.
I know you would draw me the world
or write my happiness, if I asked.
You live in the land
Of The cross forest, a sacred land
For our sacred friendship,
I may never meet you
But
I’m forever yours.



COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Con Nie 02 May 2007

A heartfelt poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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John Tiong Chunghoo 20 February 2007

quite a good write this is alfredo.

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*Mandy * 06 February 2007

you show great emotion in your poems. Good write ♥ Mandy

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David Harris 01 February 2007

Alfredo, A beautiful short poem. Well written, if only we could all find and hold our dream lovers. Keep writing the beautiful things. David

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Brittaney Static 24 December 2006

I really really like this poem.

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Martina Danielova 03 December 2013

lovely...how we feel our soulmates or how our desire to love or being loved is beyond existence. The will is the creator of our existence and reality.

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Melissa Masiza 26 March 2008

'I close my eyes to paint you'.. beautiful! I see what you meant.

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Winsy Ng 22 August 2007

'i know your would draw me the world and write me happiness' exquisite line thanks for the encouraging comments! i'm still a beginner so that is very much appreciated!

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Phats Li 06 August 2007

this is a wonderful poem! ! ..thank you for sharing

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Annamaria Jara 07 May 2007

Loved it. Very well written Alfredo.

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