A Thunderstorm Of Emotions Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

A Thunderstorm Of Emotions

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The clouds were crying
on the windowpanes;
the sky was whirling
with feathers grey and dark:
the doves and pigeons
were crushing on the ground;

The thunders were roaring…
roaring raw emotions;
harrowing echoes
were vibrating ‘Adieu'
in my chest:
the one I loved…the best!

The enormous mouth
of the sea
has smashed our hearts
with the shark's teeth;
and entirely our love
has swallowed—
paradise with no tomorrow…

Thursday, November 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,heartache,love lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2018

This is a beautiful poem on emotion and lost love having touching expression with nice collocation. The most touching line is....entirely our love has swallowed: paradise with no tomorrow... Thanks for sharing.

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Kostas Lagos 15 November 2018

A poem full of beautiful images! Thanks for sharing

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Rini Shibu 15 November 2018

Waves of emotions well expressed in this poem

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