Flying Poem by Mihaela Pirjol


Rating: 4.5

I dreamt I left this body,
Transcending mortal sin;
And to remember, hardly,
I on Earth to ever been.

I soared on wings above the sky,
Passed oceans, earth and sea;
And I saw my spirit fly—
Into Eternity.

Friday, February 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,eternity,flight,spirit
Prabir Gayen 16 January 2019

Into eternity....very beautiful expression...

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Luz Hanaii 13 November 2018

This is so beautiful, I love when I dream of flying, so liberating.

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Kim Barney 03 November 2018

I like this, Mihaela. It's the sort of thing I imagine could really happen. Thanks for posting this.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 October 2018

I saw my spirit fly — Into Eternity. /// spirit wanna be a eternal being! /// great

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 June 2018

A short and succinct poem! I sincerely appreciate the undertone! My pleasure revisiting it.

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 February 2022

"I saw my spirit fly/ to eternity" … great poetry. Enjoyed reading

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2021

A wonderful poem! Loved reading it.

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Soran M. H 26 February 2020

The world of metaphysics is much wider than the physic world, , the souls and the poems are bursting from that source too, I congratulate you for your unique skill and your fantastic poetry themes and imaginary techniques..wish you every success

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Soran M. H 26 February 2020

Oh Dear great poet, where all these hide gems were? your amazing poignant style and poetic way of writing poetry is belonging to the golden generation of the famous poets, Keep writing and stay blessed, Excellent always it deserves 10/10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2019

I soared on wings above the sky, Passed oceans, earth and sea......I can feel the powerful imagination! A beautiful poem that is worthy of reading again and again!

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