I dreamt I left this body,
Transcending mortal sin;
And to remember, hardly,
I on Earth to ever been.
I soared on wings above the sky,
Passed oceans, earth and sea;
And I saw my spirit fly—
Into Eternity.
leaving this sinful body to transcend it........ you were always spiritual in your writings. here you are too..... become a saint...... may be it is ur call....... thank u dear poetess. tony
A short and succinct poem! I sincerely appreciate the undertone! My pleasure revisiting it.
I saw my spirit fly — Into Eternity. /// spirit wanna be a eternal being! /// great
I like this, Mihaela. It's the sort of thing I imagine could really happen. Thanks for posting this.
"I saw my spirit fly/ to eternity" … great poetry. Enjoyed reading
The world of metaphysics is much wider than the physic world, , the souls and the poems are bursting from that source too, I congratulate you for your unique skill and your fantastic poetry themes and imaginary techniques..wish you every success
Oh Dear great poet, where all these hide gems were? your amazing poignant style and poetic way of writing poetry is belonging to the golden generation of the famous poets, Keep writing and stay blessed, Excellent always it deserves 10/10
I soared on wings above the sky, Passed oceans, earth and sea......I can feel the powerful imagination! A beautiful poem that is worthy of reading again and again!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am fascinated by the beauty of expression, I soared on wings above the sky/Passed oceans, earth and sea; And I saw my spirit fly — I hear the tone of Emily Dicknson here! Thanks for sharing! ! ...............! 0