A Trickle Of Thoughts - 52 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 52

Rating: 5.0

Beware of heightened emotions.
They cloud the mind,
As the strong wind,
Destroys the composure
Of the beautiful roses
In the garden.

Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Monday, December 11, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,rights,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence Craddock 11 December 2023

absolutely adored the beauty and philosophy in this imagery, at present the wind blowing in gusts is having no effect on my red roses, decades old hardy shrubs; sadly the heavy rain damages my flowers

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Terence Craddock 12 January 2024

I wrote the poems 'A Desire To Know Still Depths' and 'Wind Rain In Carpet Roses', inspired by my comment on the poem 'A Trickle Of Thoughts - 52', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-Austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-Austin.

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Terence George Craddock 14 February 2024

I wrote the poems 'Lips Red Carpet Roses', 'Perennial Red Carpet Roses', 'Blooms Silken Wax Origami' and 'Tears Gentle Wash Red Roses', inspired by the poem 'A Trickle Of Thoughts - 52', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin.

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Terence George Craddock 14 February 2024

I wrote the poems 'A Human Quest Seeks Hidden Awareness Keys', 'Human Perception Explores Reality Philosophy' and 'Perceiving Mind Consciousness', inspired by my comment on the poem 'A Trickle Of Thoughts - 52', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-Austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-Austin.

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Terence Craddock 11 December 2023

heightened emotions can be a gift to use control direct energize our endeavours, like a skill sailed ship runs with or tacks into the wind, we can control harness direct heightened emotions or ignore fall to consequences of emotions passion controlling us

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Rob Lamberton 26 March 2026

A call for heightened awareness not clouded by overbearing mental winds not well grounded.

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Rob Lamberton 21 September 2025

A wise proverb with wonderful imagery!

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Rebecca Navarre 31 December 2023

Magnificent! .. Ever so many 10'S And Stars too! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 31 December 2023

Only you could express such a subject in such a beautiful way! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 31 December 2023

Very deeply moving and wisely expressed! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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