A Trickle Of Thoughts - 62 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 62

Rating: 5.0

The wind blows slowly
on the footmarks we left
on the dusty ground until
they are wipe out,
leaving no trails behind.
The claws of dementia
are comparable to this wind.
They can sweep away
memories and relationships.

Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Wednesday, June 5, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: leaving,rights,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

'claws of dementia'...an apt description of the crippling disease's menace. I think I hear some scratching at my door; it's only mild scratching for now.

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

As I was typing, the poem-police whisked away what I'd written already. Now WHAT was I 'saying'? ?

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

I'd add 'd' to 'wipe'. : ) Are 'All Rights Reserved

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Rob Lamberton 02 July 2024

"The claws of dementia"

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 June 2024

Excellent piece I can relate Bravo TFS

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

'You can still sell the copyright or allow someone to use your work, even if you include an "all rights reserved" statement. '

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

(cont.) I'm sure Rose Marie won't mind having me quote a short piece of her poem. ;)

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

What does 'All Rights Reserved'? Are they Reserved for ME? ? ? I'm

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

***** Thanks for sharing and warning all who read this poem. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

As my dad was dying, for a day or two before 'the end' he 'thought' my sister/his daughter was HIS MOTHER. bri

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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