A Unique Girl Waving On The Distant Hillside Poem by Chang Yi Huang

A Unique Girl Waving On The Distant Hillside

Rating: 4.4


the story goes that
not long time ago,
I heard your soft whisper
from a distant hillside, which was
filling with the air of boredom.
Bit by bit,
window brings your sweet
words to my heart. Every now and then
they jumped at the bottom of my heart like a brick,
When I looked into the passing scene out of the windows.
Waiting, waiting, waiting,
my heart's that
hungry to your words that
surged my whole world with the sea of passion


.
Time goes by,
Now, my eyes are flooding
with tears, your leaving
relentlessly makes my
heart burn to ashes inside.
if you ever come back
through my door,
you will see a
box awaiting for you
in my eyes, which
contains all my anguishes
and yearns to you.
No one can deny,
my emotions are going to run wild once again
whenever you wave on the
distant hillside.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Lost.. 23 September 2009

this is a very nice poem......

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Vijay Menon 29 September 2009

its a vey nice poem i liked it 10+++

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I like your poem very nice and expressive :) ++10++ :) :) :) :)

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Seema Chowdhury 06 April 2010

a very nice love poem.keep up the good work. welcome to poem hunter. see some of my new poems too.

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Abhinav Baruah 09 March 2010

This poem filled my heart.... excellent... Good work.. keep it up! ! 10+

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Jasmin Bell 06 November 2009

this a great poem really didnt expect it from u

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Lou Lou 20 October 2009

This is a really nice poem. The ending fills my heart with sadness and the slightest bit of hope. It's a very moving poem.10

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

An interesting poem. I enjoyed it.

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