Day and night I check my mobile's screen
To read my friends messages or see missed calls
For this I am ever ready and keen
So much from space in my simple lot falls.
Without the mobile I feel uneasy
It is a must of my existence
With it I am relaxed, with it busy
Along with time, energy it takes expense.
But I require a unique mobile
That may get some message from the Highest
Who lives at a distance of endless mile
Who regards me as the friend dearest.
Yes I have that unique mobile in my chest
Where I can read all messages and calls too
Without charge and balance, it's the best
Yes, you also have, it is the heart true.
A primitive impulse to stay connected to God, that made pagans worship the deities...the poet's heart gets the relief in the mystic realization in the last stanza...though the technology -register is used but technology is not actually meant here...the classical poets search God's creatures to praise Him, n the modern mystic approach touches the man-made things n then touches God...the alternate rhyme takes the effortless natural flow...yess we receive msgs...but most of the time...this unique mobile we keep off....an eye-opener! ! !
nice and true, without technology we feel lost and disconnected. a nice write. thanks for your comments on my poems. take care
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes! telepathy which shall convey the message without charge and balance. A good write.