A Victim Of Self Loathing Poem by Hannah Diane Williams

A Victim Of Self Loathing

Rating: 4.8


Hunger pains and Stomach Aches
Dizzy spells and vomit smells.

Worn down eyes and a lack of light.
And nothing feels right.

Not always losing weight,
But always feeling like I've deteroriated
Into nothing.

Everything has gone to shit
And I feel like I owe my life to this.

I thought this demon had disappeared from my life,
But now it's crawling inside of my mind.

I want to quit, but I need this.
And I'm terrified I'm going to die
Before someone realizes I haven't quit.

Friday, March 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: anorexia,depression,anxiety,demons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 14 March 2020

A well expressed poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece....10++++

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Hannah Williams 03 April 2020

I honesltly don't get on this site too much but im so glad this happened. Thank uoi! ! !

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Shaun Cronick 14 March 2020

Great poem and so heartily and fearlessly portrayed. This sums up my poetry writing process. Well done on being chosen for Member Poem of the Day. 10++ And the warmest salutations again.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 March 2020

Depressionen! ! ! But, try to lift up your heart with the truth! Following righteous morals; Hope is the key! ! ! ! A light ahead of you awaits. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hannah Williams 03 April 2020

Thank you so much. Your feedback means a lot!

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Hannah Williams 03 April 2020

I appreciate all the feedback :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 March 2020

I want to quit, but I need this. And I'm terrified I'm going to die Before someone realizes I haven't quit/// wonderfully written on the self depression, anxiety; beautiful poem penned; congrats for beings selected as POD

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Jayatissa K Liyanage 14 March 2020

Undeniable truth about depression. It needs treatment, of course. Well crafted enlightening poem. Congrats over your positioning. Thanks for sharing.x

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 March 2020

want to quit, but I need this. And I'm terrified I'm going to die Before someone realizes I haven't quit. Anxiety expressed so well. tony

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Rocky 14 March 2020

Depression and you are a moron

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