A View Beyond Poem by soren Barrett

A View Beyond

Rating: 5.0


I saw the end of the world today
It ended as it began
Time blistered, peeled and fell away beyond the reach of man
All the dimensions collapsed into one
Space and energy into the dust of time
The force of entropy there was none
Only consciousness reigned sublime

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 05 June 2022

Outstanding work.....thanks for sharing....

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soren Barrett 05 June 2022

Thank you for taking the time to review this poem I appreciate your comment

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David Wood 12 February 2022

Very profound poem with excellent imagery. A poem I hope will soon be Poem of the Day.

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soren Barrett 05 June 2022

Thank you so much David for reviewing this poem and for your most generous comment. excuse the delay in response I have been away.

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