Fire, Water, Air And Earth Poem by soren Barrett

Fire, Water, Air And Earth

Rating: 5.0


The sun warms me
lighting the beauty all around
It's golden glory
Paints flowers of every shade and hue
Seductive scents are launched by gentle breezes
And the brook's dancing waters
Whisper to me
As it passes through emerald green meadows
Lazy lace clouds silently spread,
ever changing patterns of shadows
Over hypnotic waves of rippling grass
Birds serenade, accompanied by
Cicadas, and rustling leaves
Trees sway, and butterflies lift and fall
As shadows lengthen, night draws on
Imitating the golden orb
Fireflies of green and yellow pulse and fade
drifting through the darkness of space.
Its lunar sister reflects
A soft silvery glow
A distant symphony of frogs and crickets
Play in concert under a shower of stars
Distant thunder rolls, lightning flashes
Drops patter on the clay tile roof
The smell of fresh rain on dry ground
Fire, water, air and earth
All that was, is or ever will be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2022

I agree with Ruta Bravo!

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soren Barrett 10 April 2022

Thank you so much for reviewing and commenting.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2022

Some poetry has the power to transport the reader to an environment that is so beautiful, it's beyond description. This is one of them. Incredibly beautiful imagery and words, soren!

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soren Barrett 10 April 2022

Thank you for your welcome and generous words

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Ruta Mohapatra 10 April 2022

Beautiful description of nature!

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Nosheen Irfan 30 July 2022

Stunning imagery! A feat for the senses.5 stars!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 April 2022

The four elements of fire, earth, air and water are the foundations of life. They exist in a harmonious balance. These things have been depicted brilliantly in this great poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 April 2022

A beautiful presentation of the great four elements. Well crafted write with crystalline images.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 April 2022

Paints flowers of every shade and hue Seductive scents are launched by gentle breezes And the brook's dancing waters Whisper to me.......Marvellous.....10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 April 2022

What a wonderful nature poem, dear Poet Soren. The vivid imagery of the poem transported me into into a world of absolute beauty.

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