A Vision Poem by Jeanette Telusma

A Vision

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A while ago.
I saw myself dancing
In a large open space with
Blue skies above.
All dressed in white.
I heard such beautiful sounds.
With such grace and happiness
I kept dancing.
As if before my King.
All in a vision.

Sunday, June 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 August 2017

Dancing! ! Dressed in White. With the joy of your heart. A vision! ! Presented to you from a realm. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 08 July 2017

I heard such beautiful sounds. With such grace and happiness I kept dancing. As if before my King- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -You have me smiling deep in a state of happiness. I love well-done poems of faith . Exceptional write!

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Jeanette Telusma 09 July 2017

Hi Susan, I'm glad it did :) always a pleasure hearing from you. Stay blessed.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 June 2017

Vision of dancing before the King is divine.

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Jeanette Telusma 09 July 2017

Thank you for your kind comment, blessings always.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2017

Beautiful poem with nice envision. Ldt me auote... I heard such beautiful sounds. With such grace and happiness. Many thanks dear Jeantee, keep the ball rolling...10

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Jeanette Telusma 24 June 2017

Thanks for your kind comment, stay blessed and I'll continue to read your wonderful poems.

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