Jeanette Telusma

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A Vision - Poem by Jeanette Telusma

A while ago.
I saw myself dancing
In a large open space with
Blue skies above.
All dressed in white.
I heard such beautiful sounds.
With such grace and happiness
I kept dancing.
As if before my King.
All in a vision.

Topic(s) of this poem: dance, vision


Comments about A Vision by Jeanette Telusma

  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (8/26/2017 2:00:00 AM)

    Dancing! ! Dressed in White. With the joy of your heart. A vision! ! Presented to you from a realm. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (7/8/2017 4:07:00 PM)

    I heard such beautiful sounds.
    With such grace and happiness
    I kept dancing.
    As if before my King- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -You have me smiling deep in a state of happiness. I love well-done poems of faith . Exceptional write!
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    Jeanette TelusmaJeanette Telusma(7/9/2017 11:09:00 PM)

    Hi Susan, I'm glad it did :) always a pleasure hearing from you. Stay blessed.

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  • Tirupathi ChandrupatlaTirupathi Chandrupatla (6/26/2017 6:15:00 AM)

    Vision of dancing before the King is divine. (Report)Reply

    Jeanette TelusmaJeanette Telusma(7/9/2017 11:10:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind comment, blessings always.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (6/23/2017 3:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem with nice envision. Ldt me auote... I heard such beautiful sounds.
    With such grace and happiness. Many thanks dear Jeantee, keep the ball rolling...10
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    Jeanette TelusmaJeanette Telusma(6/24/2017 8:37:00 PM)

    Thanks for your kind comment, stay blessed and I'll continue to read your wonderful poems.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 18, 2017

Poem Edited: Friday, June 23, 2017


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