Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Rookie (August 28,1976 / Southern Oklahoma... )

A Visionary Vision - Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken
I slip at times into an unimaginable sleep
Listen closely for I have spoken
My words come from within; deep

I always come back; I'm not done
Open the blinds so I may soak up
The generous rays of the sun!

Just when you think I've gone for good
Take my hand, escape with me
What I'm saying, is it fully understood
Consider the Dream Realm a safe haven, you'll see.

Jet black hair like a raven
White pale skin
You and I elope through this warm; lets begin
These doors are open for safe passage
You may come and go whenever you please
For now though, I'm the dream Master's Hostage
Don't Scream! There's No Release!

Inside you will see No fear in these eyes
No tears, No heartfelt cries
Soon I know I will awaken
When that time comes I know my soul will be taken
They may let me return a brief
To rehearse with you step by step
Machines wont do any justice
Preperations and time allowed for grief.

Stay tuned to the rhythmic beat
Up front and close ~ You have the best seat
Mouth closed, eyes shut, not a movement at all
You'll know right where to find me
Listen to my silent call
I wont hide ~ just enter inside!

Childlike demeanor, innocent playfulness
Inside these realm walls equals obsolete stress!
You can't stay long
When you h ear the glorious song
You'll instantly know you jno longer belong
I wont be in charge of what's going on.

Afterwards just know I'm smiling
I came to this point very much alive
If I could I'd give you a high five!

Oh' wipe that tear ~ Do Not Fear!
For when I wake this sleep
There will not be any more pain
For we all know this has been a hellova year...

Promise me one thing ~ You'll stay sain,
For I have two angels being left behind
Who I want to grow up smart and kind
Live for me through their eyes
Share one another's laughters and cries!

This I'm telling you ahead of time
consider it my own angelic crime
I want you to know I love you
Cherish every memory, even those anew!

Think of me when the rain clouds sing
When cotton wood blossoms sing, covering the ground
That's my way of showing you my love is true and bound!
You'll hear me in nature's sweetest sound ~ Reminding all
Be patient and have faith you'll
Have No problem hearing my call!


Comments about A Visionary Vision by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

  • Ernestine Northover (8/5/2006 9:41:00 AM)


    Oh, Kristin, this one went straight to my heart, what a 'Wow' write. So emotional and so poignant, this is one great work. Lovely, lovely, lovely.! ! ! ! ! I'm lost for words to describe how much I loved reading it. Bless you for creating it.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/5/2006 1:48:00 AM)


    TAI HAS IT SPOT-ON...KEEP THAT PEN A POPPIN' & PUMPIN' & YEARS FROM NOW, YOU WILL LOOK BACK ON THIS AS ONE HELLIFIED YEAR
    THAT TURNED OUT ALRIGHT, FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE...GREAT PENNING POETESS K.! BEAM ME UP WHENCE YOU'VE GOT O' CHANCE MISS KRIS..FRANK(The Frankster) FJR
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  • (8/4/2006 8:25:00 PM)


    beautiful kristin...the poem and your heart...love...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2006 6:55:00 PM)


    There is time enough for everything Kristin, just keep writing it out girlie friend of mine, it will be just fine, you are on the mend and your visionary vision is superb evidenc of it to me. Smilling at you, Tai (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2006 4:16:00 PM)


    Kristin, this is such a sensitive look at the journey to the other side. But all of us here at PH know how strong you have had to be, and we love you. Scarlett (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2006 2:11:00 PM)


    A beautiful sad Poem, Kristin!
    Well written, I think it's great!
    the flow & rhyme, this poem has it all!
    It's right up there with 'dreamland' 4 me!
    excellent Poem!
    Kirsten!

    Love,
    your Friend

    St.Sir Michael Manners
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 4, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 21, 2010


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