A Walk In Mansarovar Park Poem by Mamta Agarwal

A Walk In Mansarovar Park

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The sun was ready to set,
The sky had turned amber.
I felt compelled to get
Out, as I suddenly remembered,
How the view made me feel.
I could miss a meal,
Not this gorgeous sight.
It just seems right.

The birds are homeward bound.
They are so high in the sky I can’t hear a sound,
I feel in harmony
It’s kind of funny,
Here in the Mansarovar Park,
Where I come for a walk
I feel one with my creator,
And all the mental layers
Of fear, anxiety just disappear.

It uplifts my spirit and mood
As nothing else could.
I feel a sense of being
And find no reason to sing
In praise of Lord at a temple,
While there is ample
Proof of his Presence in everything
I can feel his blessings

I am because he is
This realization fills me with bliss.
I bow my head in acceptance
And have no words to express his benevolence

Saturday, December 29, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: funny
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K. V. Venkataramana 07 March 2008

Your poem unfolds your mystic experience. Superb poem! K.V.Venkataramana

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Raj Nandy 10 August 2008

It is a walk I love to take, any day any time! -Raj Nandy

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Rema Prasanna 18 July 2008

It is a pleasant, calm walk or I can say journey of life in a way to conciliate mind and soul, refreshing lines and I feel it in my heart10+ Rema

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Rani Turton 18 May 2008

A moment of harmony with the universe that is almost mystical. Well expressed, Mamta.

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Vidi Writes 16 May 2008

Those who - Can search Can watch Can dream Can feel... Find happiness all around. Appreciation with full senses A great reverence to his benevolence. Simple way of expression. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

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Poras Sharma 19 March 2008

Wondeful poem, hope to write like you some day!

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