Charms of a dark summer night!
Under a roof of a mosquito net,
Stars twinkling, moon so bright,
Dew making things sexy and wet.
I loved that silken blanket, in it,
There was a moon hidden in me,
Within the net a magic was knit,
Twinkling stars inside I could see,
Stars in skyblue sleeping gown,
Twinkling eye lids, smiles insides,
Aromatic hairs, silky and brown,
On her cheeks their naughty glides,
Many more,many more stars,
A singular moon in a soft blue cover,
Ecstatic wind her drunken guitars,
Forget sky, what on earth discover!
Around my neck two round arms,
Lips talking lips in a silent voice,
Unparalleled, summer night charms
My love, my dream, and my choice!
A highly sensuous poem ! A starry sky above and the moon trapped inside a blanket! Beautiful!
A beautiful romantic poem. The imagery puts the reader in a lively n romantic mood. Sensuousness abounds. A big 10.
A poem that immediately brought a pleasant smile on the lips, a great work.
I read his poem and now yours both are fantastic.....10 I quote: Many more, many more stars, A singular moon in a soft blue cover, Ecstatic wind her drunken guitars, Forget sky, what on earth discover!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem's sensuous flow takes my breath away. This is a really fine poem, Akhtar