A White-Washed Tomb Poem by Christopher Kirchner

A White-Washed Tomb

Rating: 4.6


Bitterness and anger- I can't live like this-
Spitting words at each other, barbs that don't miss.
Hateful venom spewed out on white walls, now stained
With dark rolling rivers that bleed through new paint

And what is that stench? The smell makes me wretch!
Death and putrescence, it's all that is left
Of our dreams and our laughter- all but forgotten-
Wrenched from our souls, now decaying and rotten.

Excrement smeared on the floors and the mirrors,
Looking for beauty would only bring tears.
Living in depths of disgust and despair,
Ever to question my choice to stay here

Sunday, March 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: divorce,marriage,relationships,struggle,anger,bittersweet love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this during a rough patch after 8 years of marriage. On November 2018, we will celebrate 33 years together.I am humbly grateful that we didn't give up.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 06 March 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Christopher. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Lyllie Menjivar 05 March 2018

Deep vibes of a marital relationship. Well, done. ***

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2018

Deep feelings of disgust at a period of lowest ebb of marriage, conveyed with clarity of thought and mind. A sad story told in eloquent finesse. Thanks for sharing Christopher and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2018

hate, bitterness, anger, no happiness.. a reality of life in a marital relationship., very well potrayed. These are facts of life.. that you write my dear poet...... thankyou very much. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 March 2018

Christopher, such a well written poem...10++++

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