Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A Winter-White Wish. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Fierce, glittering winter-bright Moon,
Lighting this white, mysterious world.
Shine throughout night, he'll be home soon
And need your lamp to keep unfurling
Each rise and fall of glistening
Snow-bound field and hidden lane.
I'll stand with candle, - listening.
Please guide his way back here again.

Comments about A Winter-White Wish. by Fay Slimm

  • (4/20/2009 9:36:00 AM)

    A wonderful mysterious imagery reminding me of the poetry of symbolists.Thanks for sharing!
    Best wishes.
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  • (3/19/2009 2:18:00 PM)

    loved the feelings it shows 10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/19/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    A very picturesque poem with the message aptly delivered (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (1/18/2009 5:24:00 AM)

    I can see you waiting with the candle in the moonlit way
    also I can see your winter-white wishes my dear fay.
    Your poem's truly visualised.
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  • (1/17/2009 6:27:00 AM)

    Reminded me of a time many years ago when I used to walk home along a tree clad winding lane. The moon used to cast many shadows but gave me light to show the way. A lovely poem, of a winter landscape. Bob (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 2:05:00 PM)

    A very picturesque piece. I can imagine these words inspiring the subject of a painting. There seems to be a whole story waiting to be told behind this cleverly constructed verse. (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    Vivid, whole, and heart-felt… When I reached the last verse it cuffed my insides. (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2009 4:29:00 AM)

    You have allowed the read to image these words in a prefect picture…thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us.

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  • (1/14/2009 2:45:00 PM)

    I saw you with the candle. and i saw the snow.. this is magnific... Is it personal, or creative, or personal with a bit of creativity? (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    A 'Frost' like poem Fay.Nice poem.
    Sid xx
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  • (1/13/2009 4:49:00 AM)

    This poem is full of images...beautiful write....Fi (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2009 9:04:00 PM)

    You speak the language of winter moonlight with exceptional grace.
    Prase for a beautiful, luminous write.


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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (1/11/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    I'll stand with candle, - listening..................oh what a humanistic approach to this mysterious world by its scintillating nature, the way it enligtens the earth so the poet too, unequalled grandeur seems to wades through to wake the humanity from decadence, bravo! ! ! ! , brilliant thougt of course ingenious,10+++++, i do appreciate, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/11/2009 1:37:00 AM)

    A beautiful image of moonlight and to capture this image again what a beautiful wish in candle light! ........10. (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2009 9:24:00 PM)

    The image of moonlight reflected in the snow evokes thoughts of peaceful beauty- artfully stated with sumptuous language and fluid rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    You make it sound so beautiful, Fay. This is a 10.

    Warm regards
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  • (1/6/2009 5:44:00 AM)

    What a lovely write Fay your pen speaks with such warmth loved it Chris +++ 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 5, 2009

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