A Windowpane Wait. Poem by Fay Slimm

Fay, this is simply sublime...I actually felt the chill at the beginning being chased by the heat at the end...wonderful

A brilliant look at life throught the windowpane, I felt as though I was waiting with you, 10 Lynda xx

Sublime is right. Fay, I told you before, there is love in them thar' souls. If there is ever any doubt in your mind, think of the Sound of Music's 'she's got it' Hxx

Suberb imagery. Exquisite, Fay. You are indeed a poet worthy of the name. Always your friend, Sandra

Well woven imagery and I specially loved the positive ending. Enjoyed it. CP

Susan my sincere thanks for the encouraging comments you have made on some of my poems here on Poemhunter - - I cannot of recent time get access to this site without lots of disjointed interruption but felt I must say a big thank you and send warm greetings from Cornwall U.K.

My windowpane-heart starts to weep, lonely For you.- - - - -> can a more perfect line be written - - probably- - but it would be written by you! 1o+++++

A very beautiful love poem and origional to boot jim

Beautiful love poetry and beautiful imagery throughout. Lovely!

You use the emotional weight of color (grey, pink and summertime yellow) to great effect in this fascinating poem about waiting and longing and joining together. Some fine original images too - 'blue veins of rain' and 'windowpane heart'. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥