A Year's Spinning Poem by Elizabeth Barrett Browning

A Year's Spinning

Rating: ★2.9


1
He listened at the porch that day,
To hear the wheel go on, and on;
And then it stopped, ran back away,
While through the door he brought the sun:
But now my spinning is all done.

2
He sat beside me, with an oath
That love ne'er ended, once begun;
I smiled--believing for us both,
What was the truth for only one:
And now my spinning is all done.

3
My mother cursed me that I heard
A young man's wooing as I spun:
Thanks, cruel mother, for that word--
For I have, since, a harder known!
And now my spinning is all done.

4
I thought--O God!--my first-born's cry
Both voices to mine ear would drown:
I listened in mine agony--
It was the silence made me groan!
And now my spinning is all done.

5
Bury me 'twixt my mother's grave,
(Who cursed me on her death-bed lone)
And my dead baby's (God it save!)
Who, not to bless me, would not moan.
And now my spinning is all done.

6
A stone upon my heart and head,
But no name written on the stone!
Sweet neighbours, whisper low instead,
"This sinner was a loving one--
And now her spinning is all done."

7
And let the door ajar remain,
In case he should pass by anon;
And leave the wheel out very plain,--
That HE, when passing in the sun,
May see the spinning is all done.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francie Lynch 13 November 2017

Who is referred to in the line: Who, not to bless me, would not moan.? The protagonist would fit into the Hollywood scene today.

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Hassan Hayati 13 November 2017

This poem took me to the other world for moments. I think this is the feature of ART, Excellent.

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Victoria Udnæs 13 November 2017

I really loved this poem! Especially the last two verses. Beautifully composed!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 November 2017

An immortal poem by Elizabeth Barrett Browning......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2017

Though Elizabeth Barrett Browning is no more yet her poems are with us. I convey to her soul thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Chinedu Dike 03 July 2022

A beautiful rendition of words

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 July 2022

A wonderful poem so beautifully crafted and well executed.

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Very spiritual and crafted wonderfully.....10++

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Abdul Rahman 27 July 2020

Verily a wonderful poem about a year" s spinning.

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Susan Williams 27 July 2020

Magnificent. The repetition deepened the impact of the words. The story did not whine but it made my heart weep for the impact of one choice on the rest of a person's life, for the unkindness of our communities who should be holding its members up. I do not understand the low score given to this piece of art.

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