(aab) Vindictive - You Devil! Poem by Edwin Alba Empestan

(aab) Vindictive - You Devil!

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Like a mean sea hag, a witch, and a Jezebel
You were at fault of your deed and it’s obvious
That you did it as if you’re the only one
That can decide things for the group

What the hell have you done? It’s compromising
You’ve embarrassed other brethren! decent at that
You’re trying to set the rules but it’s a one way
Who are you devil? vindictive you and your cohorts

Be sensitive for the feelings of others, you’re not that good!
You’re trying to rule among us unwilling to be ruled
We’re all of equal footing maybe much better than you
There was not a common ground that says you are the one

It’s so counter productive for our common grounds
Like real brothers and sisters it’s a farce
We better part ways to avoid animosity as early
Than to experience the rudeness and the madness

You’re an assuming, demanding and mean
Obnoxious, inconsiderate and blatant sarcastic
You’ve done some good things and we’re thankful
But be polite and keen to others feeling – You Devil! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jester's P 07 July 2009

full of emotion...contrast on what i wouls concider as 'love poetry'...anyhow powerfull and beautifull work. please read my work, ***013...on friendship, somehow you will see the other way of fighting what is evil that sometimes is inside us. thanks

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 July 2008

a spate of curses! who is that villian? i feel it is rather difficult to write this kind of poem without losing the thread. with regards, sathya narayana

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 July 2008

a spate of curses! who is that villian? i feel it is rather difficult to write this kind of poem without losing the thread. with regards, sathya narayana

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