Above The Clouds Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Above The Clouds

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes are pools of darkness
Where my heart flows aimlessly
Bruising the sides of twilights
Between the dawn and the dusk
The razor of your looks kills it
And it sinks deep in the nothingness
Crescent moon holds it like a cup

Whisper to me in silence
And touch me like water
Fall on me as slowly as dews
Cover me like shadows
A change is eminent
Don't remain in closed shells

Open this blocked passage
Let the lights glimmer with hopes
Stand tall like mountains
And let the rivers flow down
To the plains and meadows
And let the pasture cover the lust.

Tuesday, January 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Jack 19 July 2020

Love and they run parallel and body demands something whereas the soul wants something else. Great write MAN.

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 October 2018

Lovely poem, ...10 Your eyes are pools of darkness Where my heart flows aimlessly Bruising the sides of twilights Between the dawn and the dusk The razor of your looks kills it

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 October 2018

Lovely poem, Your eyes are pools of darkness Where my heart flows aimlessly Bruising the sides of twilights Between the dawn and the dusk The razor of your looks kills it

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Kelly Kurt 17 January 2017

I have been a big fan of Akhtar Jawad for a long time because of his ability to write about love with depth. This poem is simply wonderful, my friend. You have achieved another level!

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 January 2017

One of the most romantic, passional, intense, with genuine emotion...if Poetry is Love, and Love is Poetry...this poem confirms it! A sublime poem!

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M Asim Nehal 05 September 2018

Thanks MP for your generous and encouraging comments...

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