Abstract Love Poem by Tribhuvan Mendiratta

Abstract Love

Rating: 4.8


Too abstract is LOVE!
Yet it lives-
In slow songs.
Ripples down;
every stride every step.
Can be found;
On crushed leaves;
Of the grass
Can be found in
Leftovers of chocolate malt.
I see it in you.
And it smiles back,
Flushed, un-scalded,
And perfect.

Abstract Love
Sunday, August 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 17 September 2019

A sweet poem. Short and to the point about love. 'Leftovers of chocolate malt. I see it in you. And it smiles back, Flushed, un-scalded, And perfect.'... is so nice. Loved it. Congrats.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 September 2019

On crushed leaves; Of the grass Can be found in Leftovers of chocolate malt... i see it in you. love, love, fineness of love. tony

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Tribhuvan Mendiratta 17 September 2019

Thanks for reaching out to my heart

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2019

Love complements a life of togetherness through mutual respect and selfless sacrifice. Thanks.

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2019

Thanks also for a symbolic graphic.

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" Too abstract and perfect" . Congratulations

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Banamala Sen 17 September 2019

Beautiful! Short, but full of love! Congratulations!

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 17 September 2019

Wow! This is a perfect love-song! Is it abstract? Or says clearly - " I see it in You" . Congratulations on this poem being chosen! Well-deserved!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2019

Every stride! ! Every step! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chinedu Dike 17 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Tribhuvan.

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