>≫Adolescence Poem by Abdul Wahab

>≫Adolescence

Rating: 3.9


A lot of praise and admiration I got when I was full of innocence
Now, I am under crook clumsy seductive adolescence.
Keeping head straight, running life difficult a lot
Sensing the senses makes me a bewildered pot.
Unknown pricks me, the soul is heavy and restless
The world appearing suffocated ruthless.
Sentiment creeps in, around hard blowing the wind.
I do not know how to cool and keep quiet my mind.

Easy life becomes hard,
Thinking gone absurd.
Depth less burning, calm less itching titillation
Insatiable desire, and unreal imagination,
Fear-guilty-under morality-frozen blood
Reason-logic floats tumultuous overturn vessels in the flood.
Volcanic eruption crave quivering
Crazy emotions all are thrilling!
How to cope? where to turn?
Is easy life being forever gone?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D H 28 September 2012

The mood of the Adolescent years of a person, this reminds me sadly that mine is coming to a end.

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Wahab Abdul 16 July 2013

thank you D H for your comment..

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Wahab Abdul 16 July 2013

thank you Subbulakshmi fr yr comment

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Wahab Abdul 16 July 2013

thank you Floyd fr yr cmnt..

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Tribhawan Kaul 27 September 2013

Picture of adolescence beautiful described with word weaving. Excellent. Deserved to be the poem of the day. Hearty congratulations Abdul Wahab JI:

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Kanav 01 June 2018

Interesting

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Rachel Butler 19 July 2015

A tough subject handled well. The confusion and the guilt of the new sensations and emotions. adolescence

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Mohammad Skati 27 September 2014

Feeling the truth of life clearly. Thanks.

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Bernard Snyder 27 September 2014

Congrats' on your poem being chosen as 'Poem of the day. Well-deserved and I wish you continued success. Thanks for sharing such an interesting poem.

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Abhishek Mishra 07 October 2013

Truth about adolescence crafted in words...great write sir: -)

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