An old widower feared of life childless
Adopted an adult twenty four, age mindless
Play-God of Tholvillimangalam was the witness
Expected invitees we a chit parentless
But a thrilling process of a grown up happiness
Baptism to upanayanam, rituals chained flawless
A heck of feast went on faultless
Catchy above all, temple elephant awesome boundless
When saluted thrice the Lord, beauty matchless
Thanking we stood wordless
methinx...indiraji is very clear what she has conyed.... there could be ineterpretations....yes but the here and now....is reflective and shows us our face sensitive subject...sensitive heart to pick it up... great lines cheers
Your choice of subjects is amazing....it carries so much depth and I agree with Yoonoos - it can be read and understood at more than one level
very nice poema dn very catchy title. pl see my new poems 1. Girls are like roses... 2. The color of emotions
a very sensitive issue beuatifully handled here adopted merriment, the title too is so very apt touches the soul!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
another typical indian subject...it is being done for convenience too read my poem 'am not just a drop'