There's a crashing in my ears,
having conversations with my soul,
asking unanswerable questions
of a weary resolve.
Floating....Drifting....
On an ocean of uncertainty
the tide beats like a drum
of every broken heartbeat.
Washing...Cleansing...
I drift towards an amber horizon,
wonder whether a flat world
would greet my curious feet.
Fading...Receding...
Out, then in amidst the waves,
still frothing their teeth
before biting the sand.
There...you stand...
waving...
calling me back to shore,
open arms gesture,
begging for my heart.
Through azure shaded glasses
I watch...I wonder...
do I float...
or fall...
back into love.
7/8/08
There is no other option for a romantic but to fall back in love, a beautiful write love poetry at its best thanks for the nice morning start Chris x
oh man. nice poem. you really cought what it feels like to be stuck in uncertainty in this poem. very very lovely read.
You gotta stay afloat, Vi. Never go back - always move forward.
a lot of floating and drifting amidst emotional waves help wash clean the mind free of despair and grief...the subdued emotions find firm sandy bed once again to spot heart's sunny smile on the wait....lines of grief and of relief beautifully packed inside the write...10/10
let thy feet touch the mighty ground feel it, still warm drape yourself with too much love fly no more, pretty dove thanks.md
drifting towards an amber horizon in dreams..and beyond dreams..a beautiful piece..thanks for sharing, Viola. Best wishes. A.
I watch...I wonder... do I float... or fall... back into love. you just did it you just described what I was feeling after him... I love it. you are really good no wonder 'Saint' likes you..lol. I am going to add it to my favs. good job Crystal
'Back into love'..a line of suspense for ocean of love..fantastic10and more.Thanks for sharing
Follow the heart no questions asked. finely placed words with good imagery.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
great piece as always Viola! ! ! Love floats you through the air...........