'Afraid' Poem by Gelmar Villariasa

'Afraid'

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'Afraid'

I believe but not in me
I can be strong for whom it would be
I can smile if you want me
I can care if you are worthy
I can share if you ask me
I can walk if you need me
I can carry on, you don't need to tell me
I just need to calm this feeling inside me
I don't know what it is but it keeps bothering me
I really need to move on, to suppress this fear inside me
but how it can be aid if I am afraid of things around me?

Thursday, June 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
seeking for guidance

casual day

internet cafe

my self

my literature prof.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akachukwu Lekwauwa 26 June 2015

Fear is an adversary that must be conquered, nice one. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem 'Isthmus Of Pain And Joy'

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Gelmar Villariasa 26 June 2015

thank you.. ^_^

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 November 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Gelmar. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 04 July 2015

A sincere inward reflection and soul searching will for sure reveal the source of ones fears. I believe that fear is a bunch of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance, thanks why on facing fear squarely, often one finds it inconsequential. I like the depth and insight of the poem. In conclusion, one must keep faith because faith keeps those that keep the faith. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 02 July 2015

Everyone is afraid of one thing of the other. I am too. Of many things. Poems like this gives me some sort of support. Like it. thank you

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Allotey Abossey 26 June 2015

Brilliantly written, excellent diction, great work, inspirational. God bless you

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Gelmar Villariasa 26 June 2015

thank you ^_^ it is my first time I'm kinda scared to post this but thanks ^_^ I'm motivated now to post my aall work..

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Kelly Kurt 26 June 2015

Fear can be overcome. It is usually a product of lack of information. I liked the first person writing of this piece, Gelmar

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Gelmar Villariasa 26 June 2015

yeah! you're right I hate to study that is why ^_^ but thanks..

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